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Friday, 8 June 2018
cameo
Mum
As she smiled at me I could see something was different,
I wondered what it was …. Bang!!
There it shot into my mind, it was my brothers birthday so there I thought…
but no because we had everything ready for it.
So I was confused like a cheetah who has lost his meal.
Pow! There it was, she was working hard lately??
No that wasn't it because it is my brothers who do most
of the work that she is meant to do.
So there I sat wondering... wait where is she ‘oh’.
I went to her bed room and there she was asleep,
that was it,
she was as tired as a tree sloth.
By Indica-yve Tomars
Thursday, 24 May 2018
Friday, 18 May 2018
Tuesday, 29 August 2017
indicas poem
I am Indica-yve.
I wonder what the next thing ill do in my life.
I hear the birds singing every morning.
I see the moon every night that lights my way to my dreams.
I want to see my feuter life so it will Gide me through each day.
I am Bindi.
I pretend i like my brothers cooking.
I fell my grand mother is whit me on my quest to find my place in this world.
I touch the harts of my loved ones.
I worry that my mum will pass before she has tot me all she knows.
I am happy.
I say i had a good life but how knows what will happen.
i try to believe i can fly but not up in the sky whit twirls in my life.
I hope my family stays together and doesn't fall apart like a jig saw dose.
I am Indica-yve tomars and this is the poem of my life.
I wonder what the next thing ill do in my life.
I hear the birds singing every morning.
I see the moon every night that lights my way to my dreams.
I want to see my feuter life so it will Gide me through each day.
I am Bindi.
I pretend i like my brothers cooking.
I fell my grand mother is whit me on my quest to find my place in this world.
I touch the harts of my loved ones.
I worry that my mum will pass before she has tot me all she knows.
I am happy.
I say i had a good life but how knows what will happen.
i try to believe i can fly but not up in the sky whit twirls in my life.
I hope my family stays together and doesn't fall apart like a jig saw dose.
I am Indica-yve tomars and this is the poem of my life.
Wednesday, 2 August 2017
The happiest moment in my life...
The happiest moment in my life was when I was born because there was a new beginning for me. A new start, a time when my life was about to come towards me.
My first sight was my mum she was as beautiful as she is now.
10 weeks later I saw these doctor`s they grabbed me then they put a board underneath me.
''Ahhhh go away''
But i could not talk
"what are you doing!''
They had finished putting it on i looked like a monkey. 
Monday, 31 July 2017
MY HERO
My hero is wholehearted because I know he will never back stab me.
He is as wholehearted as a dog.
He is brave because he will never give up on us or anyone,
He is as brave as a lion.
He is kind spirited because he is all ways happy,
He is as kind spirited as an angel.
He is independent in his own way
because he has his own ideas,
he is as independent as a lone wolf.
He is generous because he fought in war on
his country's behalf.
He is as generous as a cat.
He is strong because he fought for us,
He is as strong as grizzly bear.
He is smart because he chose to fight
for our country,
He is as smart as a crow.
My hero is my great great great granddad.
his country's behalf.
He is as generous as a cat.
He is strong because he fought for us,
He is as strong as grizzly bear.
He is smart because he chose to fight
for our country,
He is as smart as a crow.
My hero is my great great great granddad.
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